{"id":465,"date":"2004-07-04T22:01:30","date_gmt":"2004-07-04T20:01:30","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.larshvidberg.dk\/?p=74"},"modified":"2004-07-04T22:01:30","modified_gmt":"2004-07-04T20:01:30","slug":"richard-pecks-ten-commandments-for-writing-for-the-young","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.whiteberg.dk\/?p=465","title":{"rendered":"Richard Peck\u2019s Ten Commandments for Writing for the Young"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Den amerikanske forfatter Richard Peck har skrevet f\u00f8lgende no-nonsense guide til hvordan man skriver for unge mennesker:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>1. Do not commit autobiography\u2014use other people&#8217;s memories, not your own. (He writes in the first person to eliminate himself.)<\/p>\n<p>2. Don&#8217;t begin the story too early\u2014avoid too much background. Instead, start with the human voice (all readers are lonely) and action.<\/p>\n<p>3. Do not allow adult characters to take over\u2014especially the mother. A wise adult is okay, but the main character must solve the problem.<\/p>\n<p>4. Avoid sentimentality. Childhood is a jungle, not a garden. You can&#8217;t both protect and portray characters. We&#8217;re writing the biographies of the survivors. If it&#8217;s too sweet, there&#8217;s no triumph.<\/p>\n<p>5. Don&#8217;t patronize anybody\u2014don&#8217;t write &#8220;down&#8221; and don&#8217;t give advice. Raise questions. What do you wonder? No unsolicited advice. No happily ever after.<\/p>\n<p>6. Don&#8217;t attempt to recreate the wheel unaided. To write, you must read.<\/p>\n<p>7. Do market research till it comes out your ears. Get publishers&#8217; catalogues, read award-winners.<\/p>\n<p>8. Don&#8217;t communicate with young readers by e-mail. Snail mail letters.<\/p>\n<p>9. If you see an adverb, shoot it. Replace adverbs with better verbs; they are the mark of an amateur.<\/p>\n<p>10. Use good vocabulary. Don&#8217;t write if you don&#8217;t know the meaning of &#8220;fustian.&#8221; (Sorry you\u00b9ll have to look it up, just like we did!)<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p>Questions to ask:<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Who is my intended reader?<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; What successful book can I compare this manuscript to?<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; What is the first-page grabber?<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; What&#8217;s going to keep this story from sinking in the middle?<\/p>\n<p>Miscellaneous pithy pieces of advice:<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Always make the person with the most potential for change your main character.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; When writing historical novels, go to letters for conversation and read bound periodicals from the times.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; If you have writer&#8217;s block, don&#8217;t take a break and do something else. Edit an already written page until it&#8217;s perfect, then take out 20 words.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; The first chapter is the last chapter in disguise. Rewrite it when you know how the story ends and seed it with clues.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Write about other places and times to help give kids a sense of them. (Each of his novels involves a trip that changes characters.)<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; The first pages should include colors and conversation.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; There should be contrast sharper than real life on every page: male\/female, young\/old, rural\/urban. Sharpen the contrast.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; When in the story does the character find his own future?<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; In all comedies, everyone gets what he deserves in the end.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; The cover art will be bad, so make the title good.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Good novels are the best defense against video games.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Entertain on every line, annoy on three.<\/p>\n<p>&#8211; Leave out the lines people skip.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.geocities.com\/scbwihawaii\/archives\/winter2003.html\">ties.com\/scbwihawaii\/archives\/winter2003.html<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Den amerikanske forfatter Richard Peck har skrevet f\u00f8lgende no-nonsense guide til hvordan man skriver for unge mennesker: 1. Do not commit autobiography\u2014use other people&#8217;s memories, not your own. (He writes in the first person to eliminate himself.) 2. Don&#8217;t begin the story too early\u2014avoid too much background. 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